Author's note: Some people wanted to know who this "enemy" was and they had requested that I make a second story, so here you go I hope you enjoy it.
It was a year since the last time that Niko’s enemy attacked. He had for gotten about them and was prepared for another attack he stocked up on cardboard boxes and tape and had made a set of cardboard armor. He was prepared for anything, or so he thought.
It was June and the birds where chirping but strangely no one was outside. He was about to go in and call his friend to see if he wanted to come over when he saw his enemy walking down the street, they where wearing jeans with a strangely bulky dress shirt with blue and white stripes. they where also wearing what looked like a cardboard roman helmet they also where carrying a vibrant red flag which happens to be a sign of war in Rome. He came up to the driveway and stopped.
“Hey --” Niko paused. He forgot his enemy’s name. He Felt like a fool. Who forgets their enemy’s name! He walked down to the driveway and asked “What are you doing here.” “I am here to prove that I am better than you.” “Ha, Yeah right!” Niko replied. With that his enemy left and went down the street. Now to find out who this enemy of his was.
Niko went up to his room and looked in his year book and it turns out that his name is Stewart Pid. (Ha ha, Stew Pid). He looked out his window and saw Stewart out at his driveway again. What does he want now.
Niko went outside again and asked him and he said that he was going to “destroy” Niko. Niko said try. Stew pulled off his shirt and under it he was wearing a cardboard armor vest. He pulled out a cardboard sword and swung it. Niko sidestepped and the attack missed. Niko used a new move he made up. He spun so his back was facing his side, put his right leg behind Stew’s and elbowed Stew in the chest. Stew then tripped over Niko’s foot and fell on his butt. Stew, filled with rage jumped up and ran at Niko. Niko was tackled and fell over. Niko pushed Stew aside and grabbed his cardboard sword.
Niko started swinging at Stew. (Just close enough that he would flinch back.) Eventualy stew was at the end of the drive way. Stew tripped over the curb and fell into the street. Stew got up and ran home saying: “I’ll be back!”. But Stew Pid (Ha ha Stew Pid) never bothered Niko for the rest of the summer.
It was a year since the last time that Niko’s enemy attacked. He had for gotten about them and was prepared for another attack he stocked up on cardboard boxes and tape and had made a set of cardboard armor. He was prepared for anything, or so he thought.
It was June and the birds where chirping but strangely no one was outside. He was about to go in and call his friend to see if he wanted to come over when he saw his enemy walking down the street, they where wearing jeans with a strangely bulky dress shirt with blue and white stripes. they where also wearing what looked like a cardboard roman helmet they also where carrying a vibrant red flag which happens to be a sign of war in Rome. He came up to the driveway and stopped.
“Hey --” Niko paused. He forgot his enemy’s name. He Felt like a fool. Who forgets their enemy’s name! He walked down to the driveway and asked “What are you doing here.” “I am here to prove that I am better than you.” “Ha, Yeah right!” Niko replied. With that his enemy left and went down the street. Now to find out who this enemy of his was.
Niko went up to his room and looked in his year book and it turns out that his name is Stewart Pid. (Ha ha, Stew Pid). He looked out his window and saw Stewart out at his driveway again. What does he want now.
Niko went outside again and asked him and he said that he was going to “destroy” Niko. Niko said try. Stew pulled off his shirt and under it he was wearing a cardboard armor vest. He pulled out a cardboard sword and swung it. Niko sidestepped and the attack missed. Niko used a new move he made up. He spun so his back was facing his side, put his right leg behind Stew’s and elbowed Stew in the chest. Stew then tripped over Niko’s foot and fell on his butt. Stew, filled with rage jumped up and ran at Niko. Niko was tackled and fell over. Niko pushed Stew aside and grabbed his cardboard sword.
Niko started swinging at Stew. (Just close enough that he would flinch back.) Eventualy stew was at the end of the drive way. Stew tripped over the curb and fell into the street. Stew got up and ran home saying: “I’ll be back!”. But Stew Pid (Ha ha Stew Pid) never bothered Niko for the rest of the summer.
I like how you figured out how to add the enemy's name into this piece. I also think you should continue with this.
ReplyDeleteI say forgive your enemies but remember their names.
ReplyDeleteThat is a good quote Kelen, I feel that this is a good story. Not to be Johnny Raincloud or anything, but what would cardboard swords do?
ReplyDeleteI really don't know but if you used real swords they could get sued. Plus it doesn't hurt(very much)
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